This is great. It's like grown up Dc. Suess. I really like how it had a point, and a good moral. You can tell you really worked hard on this, and spent a lot of time on it. I think you should write it out in a script form, so that someone could actually read it, because the words got lost in the background noise at certain points, and it would be nice to know what they were saying. It also might have been better if the narrators voice had been added in later while you were editing, instead of having the person next to the camera, but that would be really time consuming. Anyway, good job, it made me laugh.
This was a really cool film. It was obvious that you and your actors spent alot of time working on it. Having an actual script and moral made this video stand out. It wasn't like everyone elses so awesome job.
haha wow..I would say my favorite part would have to be the taco costume. This video actually went somewhere and had a point to it which made the video very successful. The narrative, with an overall moral, involved humor which helps to keep the viewers attention throughout. The time and effort put into it definitely shows. Well done.
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This is great. It's like grown up Dc. Suess. I really like how it had a point, and a good moral. You can tell you really worked hard on this, and spent a lot of time on it. I think you should write it out in a script form, so that someone could actually read it, because the words got lost in the background noise at certain points, and it would be nice to know what they were saying. It also might have been better if the narrators voice had been added in later while you were editing, instead of having the person next to the camera, but that would be really time consuming. Anyway, good job, it made me laugh.
This was a really cool film. It was obvious that you and your actors spent alot of time working on it. Having an actual script and moral made this video stand out. It wasn't like everyone elses so awesome job.
haha wow..I would say my favorite part would have to be the taco costume. This video actually went somewhere and had a point to it which made the video very successful. The narrative, with an overall moral, involved humor which helps to keep the viewers attention throughout. The time and effort put into it definitely shows. Well done.
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